Sunday, January 10, 2010

आदि से अंत तक

एक शब्द चल पड़ा है, उसी का ये प्रवाह है,
मिलता है उसे अनुरूप संग, यही रस का प्रभाव है|
अर्थ हो, अनर्थ हो, रहे ना कोई आसरा,
ये साज़ का सम्बन्ध है, ये मन का ही लगाव है|

हर चिंगारी का अंत निश्चित है,
अगर संग वायु का अभाव है|
पर अपने किनारे तक बढ़ते रहना ही,
सत्यकाम की दृढ़ता से परिपूर्ण नाव है|

शाश्वत नहीं होता है कुछ भी,
परिवर्तन सृष्टि का स्वाभाव है|
योद्धा रण से नहीं मन से है,
यही तो अविस्म्रणीय वेदों का सुझाव है|

वो सोच स्तम्भ बन सके नहीं,
जिसपे परिस्थितियों का दबाव है|
परिणाम का परिमाण करना,
धैर्यवान में जलती लौ की चाह है|

प्रतिस्पर्धा में प्रधान केवल,
विजय का ही भाव है|
जीत का ही हर तरफ वर्चस्व है,
हार तो सिर्फ एक चुभता हुआ घाव है|

कर्म के पथ पे तो,
बरसता ही पथराव है|
फिर भी अडिग चलने की चेष्ठा करना,
ये एक वीर का चुनाव है|

अमृत मंथन की लालसा में,
खोया सदियों का उन्माद है|
इसमें उलझे रहने से बेहतर तो,
विष पीने में ही प्रह्लाद है|

शब्दों की इस रचना की शक्ति का,
किसी को नहीं आभास है|
क्रांति नहीं पर सोच जीवित रहे,
बस इसी का ये छोटा सा प्रयास है|

10 comments:

Karan said...
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Karan said...

I did not understand it fully but for some reason the message behind thepoem is very clear...

कर्म के पथ पे तो,
बरसता ही पथराव है|
फिर भी अडिग चलने की चेष्ठा करना,
ये एक वीर का चुनाव है|

for me this is what sums up the eternal struggle of good...as always u rock mr. iceman!!

Unknown said...

my god.!! it was very deep..yet soo clear..!! beautiful!!!

Arvind said...

life takes a full turn to show you the worst and to get the best out of you.....and as they say some things never change in life as like death some things are inevitable....this shows ahat are you made of where you are headed too......

touched the heart

cheers!!!! Rock Star!!!


AVI

kEeRThI said...

Google translate says:-

Had come to a word, it's the same flow,
Get consistent with it, what is the effect of interest |
Mean, be a calamity, nor are any shelter,
This musical instrument is concerned, it is passion of mind |

Every spark is certain end,
If lack of air with |
Keep going back to shore on their own,
Satyakam the boat full of determination |

It is not anything eternal,
Nature of the universe is change |
Rann is not the warrior mind,
This suggests Vedas Avismrniy |

Column not think he can become,
Jispe pressure conditions |
Results to the parameter,
Flame burning in patient desires |

Compete head only,
Is a sense of victory |
Each side has dominated the victory,
Was just a stinging defeat scar |

So on the path of action,
Brsata is only Pthrav |
Still walking Cheshta unsworn to,
It is a brave choice |

Amrit Manthan in appetite,
The mania is lost centuries |
So it better be involved,
Prahlad is drinking poison in |

The creation of the power of words,
Nobody is aware |
Revolution live on thinking,
Just a small effort of this.

/*i still dint understand anything :( :( */

Aditya said...

To be forthright, the true connotation of this poem was totally out of my league! I have become untoward to the Hindi parlance for a considerable period of time, specially with the anguishing words (which I accede is shameful on my part!). I would have liked a simpler approach, but it's your mode on the go, so Cheers to that! The usage and portrayal only shows the dexterity to use a plethora of words which make a nebulous cloud even murkier!

Gratitude to Google Translate btw. I deciphered most of the obscurity from there, even though the rendition wasn't perfect. The poem is truely profound and from the heart. I particularly liked the melange of expressions on determination, nothing being eternal and that anything done under pressure is never monolithic. Yet again, observations delineated in the form of poetry to make the reader remember one of the many Surdas's poems he must have learnt at primary school. (Albeit I detested it!)

One of the most poignant compositions I have read till date, by a person I know personally! A Kalidas in the making, I premise! I can confidently say that the designation "Bard" can surely be appended with all your other laurels in front of your name in your resume! :D Keep up the bohemian style bro!

Prajakta said...

Brilliantly written power of pen!!!

शब्दों की इस रचना की शक्ति का,
किसी को नहीं आभास है|

everything written here is absolutely true...

शाश्वत नहीं होता है कुछ भी
just change urself with time...

can't express in words..
again good work!!!
true meaning of life...

Unknown said...

Took me three readings too give full justice to the poetic excellence of this literary work.Gud one,though not assimilable for evry homo sapien that reside in this country. Still the best amongst watever little I have read abt in hindi !!

Someone said...

Well Mr. Intellect,

It might be a chota sa prayas from your side but looked really grandiose..

How true you were when you wrote the 2nd stanza. U know what, every stanza requires an intense thinking.. Every stanza speaks of your experiences and your struggles to know what it takes to reach the goal.. you actually elucidated few things on which we must cogitate..

Especially this one,

अमृत मंथन की लालसा में,
खोया सदियों का उन्माद है|
इसमें उलझे रहने से बेहतर तो,
विष पीने में ही प्रह्लाद है|

What a line Mr. Intellect!!
All in all it was wonderful n dulcet.

From your faithful
Reader.

Sameer Satija said...

"deep" is the word! very well written boss.. it's really difficult for me to restrict my words to hindi and avoid urdu! andaaz bachchan saab se kaafi milta hai.. khayaalo par tajurbe ki jo parat bichhi hai, behtareen hai! hum khush huye! you'll get madhushala soon! :)

na poochho ki hai meri manzil kaha,
abhi toh safar ka iraada kiya hai..
na haarunga hausla umra bhar main..,
kisi aur se nahi, khud se vaada kiya hai..

namaskar! :)